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	<title>琥珀春秋 &#187; 英语学习</title>
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		<title>英语短语</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:17:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[由于应对英语听力测试，这两天狂听了4units的英语听力，加上今天的英语课讲到的earth的话题，回答下同学的问题：
what warnings does the 2012 give to you?
I think we should keep a respective mind to our planet. we are a grain of sand in the whole universe.
we should refuse to the wars ,which I think the biggest evil in the world .
everyone of us should insist on a vegetarian. If you were  pig [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>由于应对英语听力测试，这两天狂听了4units的英语听力，加上今天的英语课讲到的earth的话题，回答下同学的问题：<br />
what warnings does the 2012 give to you?</p>
<p>I think we should keep a respective mind to our planet. we are a grain of sand in the whole universe.<br />
we should refuse to the wars ,which I think the biggest evil in the world .<br />
everyone of us should insist on a vegetarian. If you were  pig or cattle , you will feel human cruelty.</p>
<p>there are two video about the war and Slaughter cattle.</p>
<p><a href="http://player.56.com/v_NTkxMjIwMjA.swf">你看不到的战争</a></p>
<p>Earthlings/地球公民<br />
<a href="http://v.ku6.com/show/aE_5-4rBSRfdvQIk.html">地球公民</a></p>
<p>At last .I will give you a video about the beautiful world .  we also need a heart to discover beauty.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.tudou.com/v/FDaPnFWk0Dc/v.swf">一位挪威攝影師七天不眠不休之作,让你感动到落泪的自然奇景</a></p>
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		<title>on my way in the Entrance Test of English for Graduate</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Feb 2011 10:14:21 +0000</pubDate>
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				<category><![CDATA[英语学习]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[考研路上写过的几篇作文，虽说自己大学四年中没怎么学习英语，不过最后这段时间的作文写作，我感觉还是有所收获的。
The Internet gossip
In the vivid picture, a person describes a bird-like creature to another person, who quickly spread this message through Internet along with imagination and exaggeration. The online message, traveling from one person to another, evolved into a sensational story about a man witnessed a great dinosaur.
What an interesting picture it is, however, the [...]]]></description>
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<p>The Internet gossip</p>
<p>In the vivid picture, a person describes a bird-like creature to another person, who quickly spread this message through Internet along with imagination and exaggeration. The online message, traveling from one person to another, evolved into a sensational story about a man witnessed a great dinosaur.</p>
<p>What an interesting picture it is, however, the picture also warns us that in the Internet era, people should learn verify the truth of the hearsay. The history of gossip is as long as human beings itself, while, no age can parallel the Internet age in speed, range of spreading rumors. Advanced network tools, including BBS, MSN, chatting room, make it convenient to talk with remote friends, But at the same time, accelerate the diffusion of rumors. What’s more, a lot of people couldn’t identify the reality they heard or just believe it without thinking.</p>
<p>To control the disruptive influence of online gossip, on the one hand, we should improve the ability of indentify what is right in the hearsay and spread the message without over-exaggeration; on the other hand, the supervision department should strengthen the punishment to those people who intentional spread rumors. Only through the both efforts can we create a civilized , friendly Internet environment.</p>
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<p>In the picture, a boy is absorbed in the online chatting , his aged mother wants to chat with her son , however, the boy responds impatiently :”Don’t you see I’m busy?”, Puzzled and disappointed , The old mother can’t understand why her son prefer talking with a machine.</p>
<p>The simple dialogue between the mother and her son reveals the facts that the youngsters nowadays prefer to talk to the people who never learned rather than people around him. Two reasons can be concluded about the phenomenon. Firstly, the advantage of unknown person allows the young to say whatever he want, so face to face communication is unnecessary to some extent. Secondly, Because of age gap, parents are less likely to know what their children are thinking and feeling, which makes the rare communication boring. Therefore, the young people dislike talking with their parents in daily life.</p>
<p>However, on the one hand, the online chatting has many hidden dangers. You don’t really know the people well only by the words he type, because he is probably showing what he wants to be rather than what he is.  On the other hand, for lacking of communication with elders, the young people may lose some opportunities to learn to some virtues, such as cooperation, courage.</p>
<p>Therefore, I wish we can own happiness, warm interpersonal relationship.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>As is depicted in the right picture, a diligent farmer can’t help giving the shouts of joy for the field covered with green vegetables. On the left, a young farmer, who is busy play an online game &#8212;-growing vegetables in the virtual farm, shouts out loudly “I’m happy”.</p>
<p>Although both of them are happy now, in the future, the old farmer will taste the sweet rewards of his hard work, whereas the young farmer will reap nothing but regret. The above picture reveals us a thought-provoking fact that Addiction to virtual life brings much hurt to the future life. Once there was a hardworking young man who had a admiring job until the white-collar got addicted to an online game named “happy farm”. He indulged himself in the virtual game and couldn’t finish the job his boss assigned to him. Finally, he was fired.</p>
<p>Internet creates a cyberspace where people can escape from the stressful and tiresome life in reality and find temporary relaxation and pleasure. However, we must realize that we are not live “in an internet vacuum”, but “in the real world”. If we wish to turn our dream into practical reality, we still need laboring and persevering work..</p>
<p>   </p>
<p>   In the picture , an old man buy some eggs and paid 100 Yuan to the woman seller. The woman examined the money carefully fearing that it was forged. Meanwhile, suspecting the eggs were artificial, the old man checked their quality with caution. The both cast doubts on each other. The drawing mirrors a current social phenomenon about the gradual loss of trust among people.</p>
<p>  A host of dishonest behaviors should be responsible for the crisis of trust in our society. To earn huge profit , Some businessmen manufacture or sell fake and inferior goods at the cost of common customers’ interests; for the purpose of improving the ratings, some media  may exaggerate the story or twist the news to attract public attention without any sense of responsibility; in order to “gain” personal benefit, some people buy pirate products , which will in turn promote illegal acts.</p>
<p>  It is apparent that , if left unchecked , the trust crisis will lead to the corruption of public morals and incur great financial losses. On the one hand , we should truly value trust ,keep promise and boycott the fakes; on the other hand , the supervision department should strengthen regulation and promote honesty with the joining efforts of the media . In this way , our society will return to  sincerity and faith.</p>
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<p>   As is depicted in the picture, an opera actress is playing attentively. A young man, who sits in the front row, seems to be asleep. Meanwhile, an old opera fan appreciate the performance with absorbed interest. Two generations’ attitude to the traditional Chinese drama makes a sharp contrast.</p>
<p>   The picture mirrors the phenomenon that Chinese culture is facing an unprecedented (great) challenge. Many young people is indifferent to it even want to discard it. They enjoy the Japanese Cartoon and the South Korea TV series, however, argue that Chinese drama is outdated. In Contrast, An increasing number of foreigners regard Chinese culture as priceless treasure. They frequently resort to the tradition Chinese philosophy for solutions to present problems and highly value learn tradition Chinese medicine and promote Chinese medicine in their own country.</p>
<p> Fortunately, the government and some social groups have taken great efforts to protect and promote Chinese culture. Firstly, Culture education should be introduced to school. In addition, extensive publicity should be generated to promote tradition classics in the common people. On the other hand, more and more young people realize the great value of tradition, and voluntarily make contributions to promote it. With the joint efforts, I am convinced that the Chinese tradition will enjoy a revival.</p>
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<p>It is apparent that, if left unchecked, our native culture will loses the soil renders that nurture, being weaker day by day.</p>
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<p>As is depicted in the picture, In the Forbidden City, a emperor is preparing to taste the delicious star bucks coffee, a famous coffee brand come from America. Nowadays we can see, the traditional oriental culture and the western culture are combined together.</p>
<p>   Owing to the modern transportation and the invention of Internet, the world is becoming smaller and smaller. In china, more and more people start to select to travel abroad, achieve their education at overseas. In addition, the Hollywood films are prevalent in our country. At the same time, an increasing number of foreigners regard the Chinese culture as priceless treasure. They frequently resort to the traditional Chinese philosophy for solutions to present problems. For example, many American businessmen consider the Art of War, an immensely influential ancient Chinese book on military strategy, as their guide in their business competition.</p>
<p>   As we have learned, the spirit of 21 century is one of cooperation and coexistence. We should be open-minded to the different culture. I believe, with the combination of world culture, we will witness (enjoy) happiness, civilized world.</p>
<p>More and more people start to select the foreign country as holiday tourist destination.</p>
<p>As shown in the picture, mountainous waves are crashing the coastline. When encounter such a big wave, the vast majority of people take them as dangers and escape in great panic. However, the boy in the drawing dashes to them excitedly. And he could hear a voice in his heart shouting:”there are chances to surf”. From the brave boy, we could see that challenges present great opportunities for those courageous people.</p>
<p>It is understandable that many people are reluctant to accept challenges since they are often companied with unavoidable dangers. For example, the financial crisis now sweeping over the world is a great challenge. As a result of the crisis, the economic growth has slowed down and future prospect has become unpredicted in many countries, the business environment has deteriorated and many enterprises have gone bankrupt, salaries have been reduced and a growing number of workers have been laid off. However, this financial crisis has also provided precious changes for governments, enterprises and individuals. The challenge may promote the national economic restructuring and transform economic growth mode. It could stimulate enterprises to innovate to enhance core competitiveness. It will also push people to learn more knowledge about professional field to upgrade themselves.</p>
<p> When facing tough challenge, we should not at a loss what to do, but have a belief that the god closes a door , he opens a windows for those who have the intelligence to discover it .</p>
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<p>Water is pouring out through the hole in the cracked barrel. Next to the barrel, a broken iron chain is painfully moaning that it couldn’t bear the strain. In the two scenes, the barrel and the iron chain cannot perform their function effectively due to their weak points.</p>
<p>The above picture remind me of the famous “wooden barrel theory”. This theory argues that how well a thing can perform decided by its weaknesses. This theory can insightful explain why it is unwise to separate science and arts discipline in the senior high school. The students influenced by the separation can’t have a balance development and their achievement will be limited because of their ignorance of some subjects. The unwise decisions of some so-called experts can prove the above point. With little knowledge of other domains, they only resort to basic theories of their own field to solve complicated problems and eventually caused great losses.</p>
<p> As mentioned above, the final factor is not your performance in what you are best at , but what you are worst at. Therefore, we should not only develop our advantages but also strive to overcome our weaknesses to constantly perfect ourselves.</p>
<p>Liuxiang, the World champion of 110-meters hurdles in 2004 Athens Olympic Games, made determined to attempts to be an outstanding athlete in 2009 Beijing Olympic Games. Nevertheless, he had to give up the event due to the hurt in his left foot. With a painful and disappointed mind, he left the Beijing Olympic. But Now, the 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games , He again prove himself. The Liuxiang’s example exemplify that the success is a process of continuous self-improvement. Difficulties are the indispensible stones on the road of our lives. We should keep a positive state of mind and not be defeated by the so-called difficulties.</p>
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		<title>使动词,动形容词</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Aug 2010 13:29:37 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>转载自：<a href="http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/articlelist_1234396710_4_1.html">http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/articlelist_1234396710_4_1.html</a></p>
<p>一类特立独行的词——使动词</p>
<p>英语江湖中，有一个简单却传奇般的问题，如分辨下面的两句：<br />
YOS is interesting<span style="color: #990000;">.(<span style="color: #000000;">YOS 是个很有趣的人，重在外人的感觉。</span>)</span><br />
YOS is interested.(YOS  感到感到，重点在于自己的感觉。)<br />
*注：YOS为“黄老鞋”英文（Yellow Old Shoes）之简称。</p>
<p>曾经各路神仙进行过辨析，比如说哪个用于描述人，哪个又多用于描述物，等等等等。一则难记，二则如上所示，两个句子都是描述黄老鞋这个人，毫无问题。——此说不得要领！<br />
其实这个问题涉及到一类动词，其用法稍有独特处。待老鞋解剖之，则不但上面这个小问题，还有一堆相关问题，自可迎刃而解。<br />
此类动词，谓之“使动词”。</p>
<p>一、 感觉类动词往往是使动词，意为“使……怎样”<br />
若问surprise是什么意思，答曰：惊奇。其实作动词的时候，其意思是“使……惊奇”，永远是及物动词。所以，<br />
√It  surprised me. 它使我惊奇。<br />
×I surprised.  我很惊奇。<br />
而这样的词绝非个例，我们经常见到。老鞋法眼瞧处，发现：<br />
感觉类的动词往往是使动词。<br />
如excite, interest,  satisfy, puzzle, upset, disgust,  bore等。<br />
上面的词，要说成“使/令……兴奋/感兴趣/满意/迷惑/烦恼/恶心/乏味”。<br />
所以，“这个问题使我迷惑”，不能说成<br />
The  problem made me puzzle.<br />
而只用说<br />
The problem puzzled me.</p>
<p>it interested me .</p>
<p>the rumor excite her curiosity.</p>
<p>(使动词做动词的时候，主语往往是不是人。)</p>
<p>二、使动词的-ing型和-ed型分词往往当形容词来用，描述事物特征。<br />
我们都知道，be doing或be  done一般分别是进行体和被动态；分词作形容词，只是偶尔有之。且看且想，老鞋看出：<br />
使动词的分词形式往往当形容词来用。<br />
试看：<br />
He is  swimming.<br />
He is  interesting.<br />
两句结构相同。前一句是普通动作的进行体“他正在游泳”；后一句是感觉类动词，是说“他这个人很有意思”。<br />
再看：<br />
She  was killed.<br />
She was satisfied.<br />
前一句动作：她被杀了；后一句是描述：她感到满意。</p>
<p>三、-ing型的基本意义是“使/令……怎样的”，-ed表示“感到……的”。<br />
把握了使动词的根本含义，再分辨由它变来的两种分词，就顺理成章了。<br />
-ing形容词，表示“使人……的”，也就是在动词原形意义后加个“的”字。<br />
-ed形容词，表示“感到……的”。</p>
<p>试依以上原理，准确分辨下面几对句子。<br />
The boy is upset.男孩感到失望。<br />
The boy is  upsetting.男孩是个让人感到失望的家伙。</p>
<p>The students are satisfying.这群学生让（别人）感到满意<br />
The students are  satisfied.这群学生（自己）感到满意。</p>
<p>The teacher is boring.这个老师是令人讨厌的。<br />
The teacher is bored.这个老师感到讨厌。</p>
<p>细心的人可能会发现，上面几对句子都是拿人来做主语。也就是两种形容词都可以用来描述人。如果拿物来做主语，就只有一个能够合格。<br />
√The speech  is boring.<br />
×The speech is bored.</p>
<p>老鞋似乎回到了老路，考察起哪个能够修饰谁的问题了。其实这个只是顺便提及，并不是问题的要害。因为明白了上面所述的基本原理，谁能修饰谁，就是不言而喻的。<br />
既然过去分词表示“感到……”，当然只能描述有感觉的事物，不能说一块石头感觉如何吧！而现在分词既然表示“令人有某种感觉”，则其空间是无限的，因为任何事物都可能引起人的某种感觉，岂止于人乎？</p>
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		<title>我梦想有一天，深谷弥合，高山夷平，歧路化坦途，曲径成通衢，上帝的光华再现，普天下生灵共谒。</title>
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		<title>2008年6月，CET-6作文</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[ As we know , we live in the times of knowledge explosion, when news,information even rumors comes from all around of the world. (when news , facts,opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world )With the development of information technology,more and more e-books come to our world.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div> As we know , we live in the times of knowledge explosion, <span style="color: #ff0000;">when news,information even rumors comes from all around of the world.</span> (<span style="color: #008000;">when news , facts,opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world</span> )With the development of information technology,more and more e-books come to our world.</div>
<div>Some people believe the traditional books become a things of past is just a matter of time. Firstly , The e-books is very cheap and <span style="color: #ff0000;">convenient</span>, we can spare no effects to gain news or knowledge that we wanted as long as we have a computer or electronic device . At the same time,environment protection is another matter which let them advocate the e-books. The e-books could decrease the production of woods,which is beneficial to our earth because the forest is our earth&#8217;s lung.So they have a firmly belief &#8212;-&#8221;the more we use it, the better life we have&#8221;.</div>
<div>In my opinion, the traditional books will never disappear.On the one hand, Our human has  thousand years history, which is recorded by the traditional books.If we want to get the precise information about the history , the traditional book is necessary . On the other hands , the e-books often have some errors,which disturb our reading and learning . Moreover Reading a traditional books is a good way of relaxation, Thus ,the traditional book will exist forever.  </div>
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		<title>08年考研英语大作文</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2010 05:51:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[there has been a heatted discussion about the picture . As is shown above ,there are two handicapped men ,one is lame in the left,while the other is in the other one,with their walking sticks being stand in the road,supporting each other go ahead. simple as the picture is ,the simple as the picture is,the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>there has been a heatted discussion about the picture . As is shown above ,there are two handicapped men ,one is lame in the left,while the other is in the other one,with their walking sticks being stand in the road,supporting each other go ahead. simple as the picture is ,the simple as the picture is,the symbolic meaning is as deep as the ocean.<br />
our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of cooperation,with the wenchuan earthquake reconstruction being the foremost.After the disaster,people from all walks of life in the society were mobilized and united as one,which is so called cooperation.According to the last survey,peopel participated in the rebuilding after disaster has reached as many as 7,000,000,which is the population of a big city. were there no cooperation of the whole society ,hardly can wenchuan&#8217;s people restore their home.</p>
<p><span id="more-215"></span>During the process,especally in the times of knowledge explosion ,when news , facts,opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world. If we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people enjoy their life to the uttermost , cooperation would be a indispensable spirit.<br />
【存在问题：第一段中的句子结构过于复杂，不连贯，不通顺<br />
第三段中的开头部分，过于罗嗦。<br />
整体上过于强调句式，而忽略了文章本身的连贯性。<br />
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再次修改的。</p>
<p>There has been a heatted discussion about the picture. As is shown above ,there are two handicapped men with their walking sticks standing in the road , one is lame in the left,while the other is in the left,going ahead with each other’s help.I believe many people can understand the deep meaning that the picture bring to us .</p>
<p>Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of Cooperation,with the wenchuan earthquake reconstruction being the foremost.After the disaster ,people from all walks of life in the society were mobilized actively and united as one group,which is so called Cooperation. According to the last survey ,the number of people participated in the rebuilding after disaster reached as many as 7,000,000,which is the population of a big city .We can image if there were no cooperation of the whole society , hardly can wenchuan’s people restore their home .</p>
<p>Now we live in the times of knowledge explosion , when news , facts, opinions even rumors bombarding us from every corner of the world . If we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people enjoy their life to the uttermost ,cooperation would be a indispensable spirit.</p>
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		<title>入室抢劫</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 17 May 2009 05:26:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[在美国，每个15秒钟就有人举报一起入室行窃案，统计数据显示，去年窃贼逛够了两百多万户人家。人们实际上几乎无法将蓄意行窃的盗贼拒之门外，所以做得只是设法拦截他片刻，从而使其暴露在巡警或者附近溜达的人们面前。常识告诉我们，光照是犯罪行为的障碍物。家门口必须安装一盏灯，并在晚上开着。不管是否相信，有些人，尤其是最晚进家的孩子，晚上进屋后不把门锁上。空心门，即便是锁上了，也容易遭贼入侵。因此最好选择实心门或者铁门，因为窃贼很难将它们撬开。如果你有意购买报警装置，别忘了索要报警器的标志，并把它们贴在窗户和门上。最后，提醒一句，外出旅游时，一定要请一位信得过的邻居，再你回来前，收好每日的报纸和邮件。这是因为放在门阶上或邮箱里成堆的报纸邮件如同广告一样让大家都知道你家里没人。
 
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我写得………………
In America .The burglary happen in every 15 seconds. Statistics show that there are more than 2 million houses being&#160;&#160; suffered&#160; burglary.People almost can’t be hold the burglary at bay.What they can do was just prevent them a few minutes,made them expose to the police patrol or the surrounding people. The general sense tell [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>在美国，每个15秒钟就有人举报一起入室行窃案，统计数据显示，去年窃贼逛够了两百多万户人家。人们实际上几乎无法将蓄意行窃的盗贼拒之门外，所以做得只是设法拦截他片刻，从而使其暴露在巡警或者附近溜达的人们面前。常识告诉我们，光照是犯罪行为的障碍物。家门口必须安装一盏灯，并在晚上开着。不管是否相信，有些人，尤其是最晚进家的孩子，晚上进屋后不把门锁上。空心门，即便是锁上了，也容易遭贼入侵。因此最好选择实心门或者铁门，因为窃贼很难将它们撬开。如果你有意购买报警装置，别忘了索要报警器的标志，并把它们贴在窗户和门上。最后，提醒一句，外出旅游时，一定要请一位信得过的邻居，再你回来前，收好每日的报纸和邮件。这是因为放在门阶上或邮箱里成堆的报纸邮件如同广告一样让大家都知道你家里没人。</p>
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<p>我写得………………</p>
<p>In America .The burglary happen in every 15 seconds. Statistics show that there are more than 2 million houses being&#160;&#160; suffered&#160; burglary.People almost can’t be hold the burglary at bay.What they can do was just prevent them a few minutes,made them expose to the police patrol or the surrounding people. The general sense tell us , lighting is the barrier of criminal activity.It is necessary to put a light on the front door and light it at night..Whether you believe it or not .some people ,especially children who are the last one in and leave the front door on the latch at night. Door of hollow vulnerable to burlgar ,even though it is locked . so the solid core&#160; or the icon door is the best choice which is difficult to be pried open. If you are willing to buy alarm system,Don’t forget take sign&#160; of alarm device and paste it on windows and doors.At last .<font color="#800000"> </font><font color="#ff0000">Attention </font>. When you travel out ,let <font color="#ff0000">a believed neighbor</font> take your newspapers and mails&#160; everyday <font color="#ff0000">before you back</font> , or it will be a advertisement that tells people the home has no one.</p>
<p>课本上带的译文。明显的比我用词地道.值得学习。</p>
<p>A burglary is reported every 15 seconds in the United States. Statistics show burglars entered more than 2 millon homes last year. Actually it is almost impossible to keep a determined burglar out . All you can do is&#160; discourage hime for a few minutes, thus exposing him to police&#160; patrols or those wandering around. Common sense tells us that lighting is a barrier to criminal activity . A light should be fixed in the doorway and switched on at night. Believe it or not . some people ,particularly children who happend to be the last to come in ,leave their doors on the latch at night. Doors of hollow core ,even when locked,are vulnerable to break-ins. Thus doors of solid core or steel are much preferred as the make it difficult&#160; for the burglar to pry open . If you decide to buy an alarm device. be sure to ask for its signs and put them up on both windows and doors. Finally ,a word of warning &#8212;when you travel,make sure that you have a trusted neighbor collect and keep all the deliveries of newspapers and mail until you return . This is because a collection of newspapers and mail on the front doorstep or in you mailbox is an advertisement that no one is home . </p>
<p>自己写得文章有几处硬伤，还是对比原文来改动吧。</p>
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